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Laura Finnell


Little Sister

Venus wants to be in love.
She's all washed tonight, gilt-skinned
and warm from a towel bath.
She crackles, she bubbles with good cheer,
a little terrestrial sister.
She wants to be the noticed one
and doesn't play with moons.

She has a crush on Mars
and Earth gets in their way.  Years ago
she poured her jealous heart
over stone fields, envy becoming
bronze rima and mountains; Gula Mons,
Sif Mons, Maat Mons.

With the aeons,
Venus has grown up some,
but still thinks Earth
a drag.


Laura Finnell lives in Olympia, WA with her husband and three cats. She is a member of Seattle's Mercer Street Poets workshop and has been published in Arnazella, Slightly West, and 4th Street. See her other poem this issue, Manifest Destiny


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3.10.2001
choc from new york, ny

yes!
clever. i think earth is a drag too :-)



3.04.2001
kelli russell agodon from Kingston, WA

Absolutely lovely!
A wonderful look at sisterhood and astromony. Perfect opening line. Loved it!







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