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06.12.2000
Alysoha Tristan Sonju from Missoula MT
  
reminiscent of ondaatje...dark and engulfing
Sigh...very well done...dreamy in a suffocating sort of way. like diving deep into a tepid pool of indigo...and pulled off in a sonet form too! not easy...

04.07.2000
Sherry Chandler Williams from Lexington, KY
 
The first two lines are great.
Those first two lines really stop me in my tracks.
After that, unfortunately, the imagery starts to get diffuse and way too poetic. The notion of letting out the tether but not too far is actually a bit disturbing.

04.05.2000
C. Barboza (Godsroom3@aol.com) from Harrisburg, Pennsylvania
 
inspiring
I've been struggling with trying to write a sonnet of my own and I only hope I am able to express my intentions for my beloved with such careful word choice as Mr. Podojil does.

2.14.2000
gnaomi
   
beautiful.
i sent your verse to my fiance...

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