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Angelica Melendez


Lonely wharf fisherman
with empty buckets of
paint thumping
of no fish tonight
surrounds himself
in confectioner's sugar rooftops
teasing languid, tickling
the skies.
Alberto and Yadira, forlorn duo
eternally embraced in
the people's graffitti ink.
Hum-drum
Yum-yum
Give me some
La Coca Falls purification.
Let the rain god, Huracan
sleep with historians.
It never changes.
The rooster sings his song
backwards
while the turkey wiggles
its tail at the bored
dog-eared malanga leaf.
Listen put your ear
to the stone
hear German accents
recent footsteps on the ground
Juan Diego is laughing
Holding his reign
fingering green velvet moss
covered beds.
Patterning my steps
through the skyline
reaching the smallest
orchid in the world
locked in my throat.

In an embankment of wet earth,
rice, and beans
I'll live and die forever.



Also by Angela Melendez Stepping Into Fresh Pond -->

Angelica Melendez hails from Brooklyn, New York and is the product of a "very Neuyorican heritage and transplanted upbringing."


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04.07.00
from New York

You are fucking amazing.....I'm so proud of you.
This one has a different mood then the other ones that I have read. You are combining the city and country in you so well. This is the first one that is not about male-female relationships. There is a deep sadness like an everlasting grey day in this poem



02.11.00
Eric Dutton (pescofish@fament.com) from Pittsburg, KS

Take up the razor.
The largest body of the poem seemed unfocused. The subject moves from a wharf fisherman, to Alberto and Yadira, to "you", and finally to ["me"]. You may have started with an abstract idea. If so, the poem is not focused enough on any image to covey it.

I love the specific details like the empty bucket of paint thumping, and the dog-eared malanga leaf.

Each of the subjects of this poem, treated individualy, would make a more powerfull poem by itself than they are here, especialy with the vivid treatment each is given.

The last three lines alone, with some revision, would make a very vivid, powerful poem.







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