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Anna S. Barnett
I'll Take "Truth" for $1000
Man was made
in the image of God:
particularly
Alex Trebek.
I wonder if the guy is omniscient
or what, and if
the great cacophony of answers would resolve
into that mindless theme song
if I could read the questions on his cue card.
clues:
the way trees look through trees, and tears through tears;
smart bombs, dumb jokes, and stain-glass-windowed saints;
stone-pounding oceans pounding on our ears;
an orange, a can of marbles, and some paint.
"what is the meaning of life?" we implore
"what is a grand game of molecular billiards?"
"what is the dead weight of the soul?"
"what is but a dream?"
"what is all we've got?"
when we come back, the Daily Double:
will you risk everything for everything else?
In the Beginning, there was nothing.
then God said, let there be gameshows.
"what's light," I muttered "light, and why is hope?"
"I'm sorry," said a voice, "our time is up."
Anna Simone Barnett is currently an undergraduate student at the University of Oregon in Eugene, where she is majoring in Biology.
Email Anna Simone Barnett at anna@gumballpoetry.com.
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2.21.00
Morgan
   
Art is why i get up in the morning
I think it's beautiful. Its full of feeling and it's funny and quirky and touching all at the same time. I laughed, i cried:) No, i really thought it was wonderful. I was inspired.
editors note: reviews below go from oldest to most recent.
a poet from Atmore, Alabama
boring
I got no feeling from this "poem". Where is the emotion?
Trampas Johnson (gordonshumway@hotmail.com) from Plentywood, MT. 8/2/99
   
I liked it!
Any person who can eloquently equate Alex Trebek's perfection to God deserves a hearty pat on the back! This poem made me laugh, made me think, and to the poet who posted above, implied perfection in a human being shouldn't bring emotion. It should make you think. Just because a poem is not soggy with angst, love, or trepidation does not make it any less crafted.
Adam Spurgeon Zens (adam@locustandhoney.com) from Dresser, Wisconsin. 9/24/99
   
A poem with emotion and irony aplenty
Beautiful and symbolically charged poem.
The tension worked out here is between the dime-a-dozen, throw-away, consumerist mentality which has no philosophical room for anything but trivia and the deeper nature of truth which cannot be reduced to a game show. Hence, the Irony in the title of taking this category for $1,000. No one would dare take truth for a grand. Too scary in our day and age.
Notice the inversion of "gameshow" and "light" in the last stanza. Very clever.
It's not so much a matter of Trebek's intelligence equalling God's as much as it refers, I think, to the universal human striving, created in the image of God, to want to erect a tower of Babel-like structure of super-intelligence.
But of course, it's a "super-intelligence" comprised of trivia games.
p.s. Oh, and there's lots of emotion. Imagine yourself in that spot, wanting to get an easy trivia question but finding yourself dealing with Truth.
--Adam, Editor of
The New Review of
Christian Poetry
10-3-99
ophelia from Eugene, OR
  
incantation
well...very interesting, i must say. kinda makes you think, doesn't it? about the substance of things, and all that.
P.J. from Spokane, WA
  
Very provoking. . .
I agree with Gordon. "Bitterness does not a poet make." This one shows alot of promise, I think we've got a budding philosopher on our hands. The piece shows creativity. It's odd that a Bio student would come up with this kind of thought. Many that I know claim to have a premium on truth.
11.20.99
scott (buk3994@aol.com) from lexington,ky
Hallmark philosophy
reads like the first draft of an ill-conceived poem by a fourth-grader.
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